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Ink on the Page
by Admiral Bob
Recommends (23)
Sat, Nov 23, 2019 @ 9:00 PM

Uses samples from:

 
Snowflake
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permalink   Sat, Nov 23, 2019 @ 9:12 PM
How truly beautiful! Looking forward to reading how you transformed a piano into a guitar and vice verse. :D

Your vocal performance is so powerful, emotive, visceral. And the lyrics are crafted with such imagery. (The ending!!!!) This is an incredible song Richard.

(bowing)
Apoxode
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permalink   Sat, Nov 23, 2019 @ 9:53 PM
Such a sad song, but a powerful remix!
Not 100% sure of intended meaning, but I sense loss/grief.
Well done, Admiral Bob :)
 
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permalink   Admiral Bob Mon, Nov 25, 2019 @ 2:53 PM
I put myself in the shoes of someone with the early stages of alzheimers or memory loss, and tried to imagine how devastating a future of fading out would be.

Inspired somewhat by Kara’s heartbreaking songs as well as John Mann’s recent death.
Whitewolf
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permalink   Sat, Nov 23, 2019 @ 10:18 PM
Powerful, evocative lyrics, and beautifully sung! I love how you transformed Stefan kartenberg’s music into a musical masterpiece. Love the ending, unexpected and yet very revealing!
Siobhan Dakay
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permalink   Sun, Nov 24, 2019 @ 1:58 AM
Wow. Excellently glued into Stefan’s samples.
I for myself must admit, that I can not imagine building a new melody on to top of a backtrack. So my full respect for melody and lyrics.
Speck
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permalink   Sun, Nov 24, 2019 @ 2:39 AM
Indeed, you and Stefan are a good fit. Stellar musicianship and a great build here. Much enjoyed.
panu
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permalink   Sun, Nov 24, 2019 @ 4:25 AM
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Stefan Kartenberg
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permalink   Sun, Nov 24, 2019 @ 4:47 AM
You did a great job on this. The change of melodies and instruments is genial. Thank you this the great remix!!
Kara Square
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permalink   Sun, Nov 24, 2019 @ 8:15 AM
Incredibly POWERFUL songwriting, composition, and performance. Completely engaging and heartrending.
urmymuse
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permalink   Sun, Nov 24, 2019 @ 2:43 PM
Super power beginning and middle … super subtle end
ScOmBer
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permalink   Sun, Nov 24, 2019 @ 4:13 PM
Reminds me of some classic Foreigner.
Beautifully conceived and produced and the lyrics are great
gurdonark
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permalink   Sun, Nov 24, 2019 @ 5:51 PM
Cool vocal and well-done mix!
duckett
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permalink   Sun, Nov 24, 2019 @ 7:07 PM
There’s maybe some minor issues with seating the vocals, but a great mixter matchup indeed
Mana Junkie
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permalink   Mon, Nov 25, 2019 @ 4:06 AM
Ink on the Page is a bonafide hit.
spinningmerkaba
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permalink   Mon, Nov 25, 2019 @ 2:46 PM
Captured a 70’s style ballad with this one Admiral! I can see the lighters ablaze in the arena…wait, I mean cellphone lights.

May this style endure!
SackJo22
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permalink   Wed, Dec 4, 2019 @ 9:35 AM
Poignant pop-rock arranged with heart and performed with finesse. Bravo!