I lIke that beat! it´s nice made.
It sounds like hip hop.
not like the most of the remixes that sound like drum & bass techno and all that stuff. i really hate that.

An hip hop acapella should sound like hip hop! an yours sounds like hip hop. n1
you need to work out some things but you will find out by yourself sometime, just like i did.
waiting to hear more! cu

DaMo