what can i say…ummm…it’s ok, just kinda boring to me. it needs more. right now it’s just a beat that doesnt change much, a ‘hiphop’ orchestra sample that has been used aLOT, and the rapping. not trying to be mean or anything, but i just don’t find it very captivating.

The synth line here is a bit too old-fashioned for my taste. The vocals mix down so that I can’t make out the lyrics, even though
they sound interesting. I’m not feeling sufficient excitement here—it’s not a rhythmic burn, but just a rhythm.

Not so much that something’s wrong with it, although I’m not sure the match-ups are perfect. It’s that I’m not excited about it.