nice composition. the mix is very midly and 100% mono. you could make the mp3-file mono as well, saving half bandwidth. there’s also a lot of clipping bits, it’s overloading.

so for sounds I have complaints… fok it, most people will listen to your song anyway. and the song is very nice!

I really like it.
IMHO the mix sounds a bit high. When the song kicks in at 2:40 I found the bass to be a little weak. With a bit a tweaking I think this would be a great track. Reminds me a little of "Reign" by Unkle and Ian Brown.(I love that track) ; )

Good idea and concept, but " too much confusion here" (Bob Dylan). IMHO U gotcha get work it on. Upgrade this track, please.