well I thoroughly enjoyed this track - the bpm is perfect, I know my timing is a bit odd in this piece but you nailed it. Thank you!

Truly,

Suzi Q.

I like the vocal section that starts us off, leading into this nice bit of almost free jazz. This is a really creative melodic idea, which works well. The vocals mix well into this milieu. You really have done a good job in creating an atmosphere here—like the best underground club in the most unlikely nook in the warmest cranny of joy.

This is a really inventive mix.
I like that you’re taking chances, and passing “Go”.

The flow of the music really matches the words well. I like it a lot.

The timing is perrrrrrfect, Really nice work Mr. Duckett.

Great ambiant on this track.
Good work!
Your tracks allways bring listeners to a nice travel.

I love first 5 sec. of this so much but I’m not crazy about the electro drum (esp. the snare) that comes right in (don’t ask to offer an alternative… that kind of stuff is my biggest problem in mixes)

The rest of mix is really fantastic though (as long as that snare is pushed back)

That_s nice! Love your piano versus string and organ theme.
Very intense. I think you_ve found a good background for this “talking” :-).

Great interplay between the vocals and the accompaniment. You have some good sounds in here that blend together to make the piece really come alive.

Good work!!

Wail this here was like listenin to an exact replay of a date I had way back in the 60s with a little gal named Martha Ann Jernigan who, I kid you not, called herself Sylvia Plath Lolipop. She made me meet her in this beatnik bar called “The Furry Beaver” and while the very band you got on yor magnum opus played this very song, I thank, proceeded to reel off gawd knows what in a steady an unendin stream of conversation only there wadn’t no part for me in it. At one point I got up to use the bathroom but just left, went to another bar and started drankin. I got to feelin guilty a couple hours later and went back ta see ifn I could catch her trail to apologize and there she was, still talkin, and hadn’t missed me at all. And that’s why I ain’t no beatnik today. So I owe her that one.