Nice, almost raga-feel to the intro guitar line. That might be fun to sample for other uses.

Great melody going, when you get the melody going. Really spontaneous, like the feel of a great 60s Kinks song. For this purpose, the little synth line seems out of place (although, as you might imagine, I rarely find a synth line I don’t like).

Your melody works with the vocals well. I’d like to hear you stick with a less electro thing, and go for a 60s rock sound with this one.

I still find this a good listen, something worth putting on a CD.

i agree with gurdonark, but i like the synth line. this is really good, though it would be cool with a really good string line (or synth) at the bridge

This sounds like something that The Farm a popular uk combo from the mid to late 90`s or even any Manchester band from same era would do. I love the intro and that you have tried to create a live feel which I think you have.