sounds like a good start, but it dosen’t seem to go anywhere…

This is a good job. The blending of the two pieces works quite well. Thank you for undertaking it.

"Trinity Trail" and "Trinity Trance" are by design intended to be simple works of melody with repetition. Your remix recognizes that, and yet tries to go new places with it.

Although the piece is "supposed" to be a meditation, rather than, say, a dance track or a pop track to which such concerns more sharply apply, the dilemma for me in writing the song (and the dilemma which this remix inherits) is whether to have a "break" of something different to leaven it out.

You’ve done a good job in melding things together here, to put the two songs’ elements in a nice blend.

I appreciate you taking the time and putting in this well-spent effort. It sounds good.

I’d be curious to know where you were trying to take this — not that you owe it to anybody to explain it but I’m definitely not feeling this, there’s doesn’t seem to be anything tying it together.

Interesting. Sort of disorienting, but not in a bad way. Otherworldly.