It’s always fun to take a sample and morph it into a minimalist piece. The intro for the first minute has an ethereal, mildly haunting feel about it. I’m not sure the tone is elegiac, although it’s certainly got an other-worldly quality about it.

I like that you get some variations in you samples to give the piece continued life. By 2:40, the minimalist textures remain alive.

This would go well with a youtube or short film with a horror theme.
I hope some youtube-maker picks up on this one and marries it to some great visuals. Of course, it need not be a horror movie—it could be a movie about a guy asking out a girl who’s going to say no :).

Around 4:20 ish and continuing on, you’ve got a nice organ-y effect that keeps things interesting.

I think that the mix feels a bit busy by 5. It might benefit from more space and even a section at a lower bpm.

I like that you make efforts to make this a musical piece in a different vein rather than just random experimentation. Yet by 6:30, I feel that you’ve said all you can really say with this particular approach, and the song is just going on a bit long.

It’s a serviceable piece, well-constructed and well-mixed, but I think it needs shortening up a bit and even more of the modest concessinos to the conventions of “song” than you’ve made here.

An interesting approach.