The introductory melody wash of synth/strings supports a languid start at the vocals, with good little “knob-twiddle” electronica touches. The vocals work out well despite the tempo changes. The melody works out pretty well.

“Who the Hell is he anyway” perhaps deserves a variation in the melody, to keep the piece active.

This approach is quite workable, and I like the chilled melody and the vaguely cinematic feel of the backing. I like when you add elements in the background, and wish for more of those.

I like the little keyboard lines. I like this mix overall. I’d like it a little more if it had more variation in the way it presents the melody. But you’ve taken a really interesting approach to this one, and it mixes well.