Thx! Really apriciate it!

Hey, could you write your lyrics please? I don’t get all and I just wanted to howl along the bathroom … :)

Anything for you Alison.

Verses:
We express the same things but with different words
We acknowledge the same curve and those might-have-heareds

Just like the last line you draw to remind of past-time
A fast-winded feeling of freedom pleased to be recognized

And i can hear your doctors calling from here, saying:
Killed by his independecy and akilles-heel
Cuz he armed himself with stealthy mass-appeal.

Wheres my muse, wheres my muse
It feels like every word slipping through my mouth has been used

Staggering like the old man feeding the dirt
With my glass eye reflecting all the things that iv learned

A windowless frame in a transparent room
Flilling up cracks with plastic assumes

Shapeshift
A nuance
A venue

Chrous:
Dont stop dreaming cuz this aint over
Wreck of you life, aim til you get sober

Dont stop dreaming cuz this aint over
My friend

Thats how it was supposed to be i think.. Was a while since i recorded it. check out the acappella i uploaded and tell me what you think.

High points of your lyrics:
It feels like every word slipping through my mouth has been used

“Filling up cracks with plastic assumes
Shapeshift
A nuance
A venue”

Your lyrical content is sufficiently ‘complex’ to make it interesting, they’re not readily accessible, and some remain unexplained. But not the chorus, which is smart, since that inspires sing-a-longs (as chorus’ should) an inseparable part of feeling good about music.
You have to think a bit (albeit not very long) before you ‘get it’. That is best thing about it.
also, I like the tempo differations.

Point of wonder:
Wreck of your life, aim til you get sober
should that be:
Break up your life, until you get sober.


The complete lyrics, can you check if they correctly transcribed:
Where’s my muse, where’s my muse
It feels like every word slipping through my mouth has been used

Staggering like the old man feeding the dirt
With my glass eye reflecting all the things that I’ve learned

A windowless frame in a transparent room
Filling up cracks with plastic assumes

Shapeshift
A nuance
A venue

I wrestle myself as I walk along the weary-
motely watching i find myself staring
building up an empire, of my great desire
while fumes/fuel from my thought process take me higher…

Higher and higher, I ain’t stoppin’ there,
My avalanche of color starts over there,
And I’ve got the solitary key to go through.

Grey and delicious
The traps can be so vicious
Prepare for the ultimate takedown.

Part time experience
Might save you from deliverance,
But will it serve the greater cause?

Chrous:
Don’t stop dreaming cuz this aint over
Wreck of your life, aim til you get sober

Don’t stop dreaming cuz this aint over
My friend

Alison, thank you very much for ur comments. Really, you make it all worth so much more. Iv recently got into chiptunes and iv got some chilled tracks coming up. Ill send them to you asap.

Your almost right about the lyrics. It goes like this:

I wrestle myself as I walk along the weary- motely watching i find myself staring
building up an empire, of my great desire
while fumes/fuel from my thought process take me higher…

Higher and higher, I ain’t stoppin’ there,
My avalanche of color starts over there,
And I’ve got the solitary key to go through.

Do you still listen to it? Man im gonna give some fresh stuff to listen to. Some new lyrics to wrap your head around :)

You dont know how much your comments means to me. Thank you.

Thank you man. Im really sorry i havent been in touch with you latley. I lost your mail in the 5000000 spam ones i get every day.

Iv been really bussie setting up a new live set while working all the time iv got left. Sadly, it usually ends up the other way around.

Im still very much interested in your work. Please tell me if you need some jazzy vocals :)

no probs. Just keep doing the good stuff, nothing comes to us without struggle and fighting hard for it, Barack Obama said so himself! ;)

And yes, I am too spotty about my checking this site … it’s life.
i’m gonna go sleep now, i will check out your new stuff later … ;)

Very much so. I dont want my crappy mixing skills to interfere with whatever whomever has in mind.

Thanks for the long comment. I didnt even realize that i got one since my mail didnt tell me.


Ill give Calendergirls a good listen:)

Cheers

hey kiliam jus love the vocals…can u please post the entire lyrics used in the mix by Ghost_K…jus love tht song but dun kno all the lyrics to hum along…wud really appreciate it…

Hey! thanks for the comment! You will find the lyrics to messages above yours :)

There is definitely more to the lyrics than what was posted. You’re right. There’s a whole second verse that wasn’t included! :(

I’ll do my best - I won’t even attempt what comes out between the verses!! Something about the fuel from his thought process taking him higher…

Higher and higher, I ain’t stoppin’ there,
My avalanche of color starts over there,
And I’ve got the solitary key to go through.

Radiant and delicious
The traps can be so vicious
Prepare for the ultimate takedown.

Hard time experience
Might save you from deliverance,
But will it serve the greater cause?

(Repeat chorus)

Am I close?

Yep your right. I wasnt at my comp when i wrote the reply to Alison.

Its actually its “grey and delicious” and “part time experience”.

Do you like em? The lyrics i mean.

Thanks for the comment mate.

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