Yes. A dental drill, a jetplane and a glitchy synthburp giving way to dynamic drums. The synthburp would be annoying, but it’s not a solo sound for long. The vox and percussion are dynamic and exciting.

This one feels real and immediate.
It rocks without a riff. This mix works for me. I’d love to hear it with a different and warmer synthburp in the background.

I’m not feelin it on this one, take out the “burp” and mix up the percussion a bit. Altho it does go well with the vocals.

this is exciting and fresh. Especially the intro and the way you did drums