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The vocals fit pretty well with the music. The music has a lot of dynamism. I liked it all pretty well, but it didn’t "grab" me.

I think that the piece might be more fun with some variations—perhaps a bit more variation in the
music, but also the introduction of disparate vocal samples might work. A few electronica twinges of chaotic sound might help, too.

I liked this one fine, don’t get me wrong. But I keep thinking how it could be more—and how it could fill out 3 minutes.