The little keyboard line is fun, and the beats have a raucous ramble to them that works pretty well.

The way the sounds pan in the headphones is very uneven—it’s almost mono in one headphone and almost silent in the other. I think that the different sounds should be made “more stereo” and differnet tracks might be panned into different places into the mix to make a more lively sound.

A lot of the elements of the mix are very interesting, and the sync, while not perfect, is workable,
but the mix, particularly the way the sounds sound a bit flattened into one side of the spectrum, might bear a closer examination
in the next mix. I suspect this flaw could be easily cured by just re-panning the track and uplaoding a replacement.

The electronica you use has an edge to it that fits with the vocal—with a few mixing improvements this mix would work much better.

Welcome to the mixter!

Nice effort and welcome to the mixter, though you got me thinking my headphones are bust :o)