i like the song but i am not feeling the vocals on the music….but maybe that´s just because i´ve been listening too much to operas lately….

This song creates an image of chillin on a tropical island, enjoying the serenity, when all of a sudden an ocean barge comes through and dumps sonic garbage all over your paradise. The lyrics don’t fit. They aren’t synced with the music. Not only do the tempos and vocal beat accentuations clash, but the vocal message isn’t emphasized by the music.

On the bright side…You were chillin on a tropical island before the vocals showed up. Instrumentally, the track is nice, but calls for some femals vocals a lot softer than Kendra’s harder, edgier style brings. I suggest revisiting the tropical island and finding some sounds that make it more like the paradise it should be.