I like the parts where the sound is full-on. Drums are cool too. Great ideas in this.

you’ve got some really great elements going on here. i swear, if you had just kept the “ah ah i am broken” stuff (and maybe even used it in a few other places) and dumped the other vocal tracks, this would be awesome. it’s still a very solid backing mix and concept, just a few synch issues with the main vocal verse tracks.

I think there are not tune or relation between voice and music. But if you could fix that problem you could have a very very good trip hop remix of this one. I think there are two separated songs. Fix the style of the voice and the tune… or tune your music to the voice (Dm - Gm). I really liked the music and loved the strings.