Nice grooves and beats here - I really like the use of the Rhodes, from the choppy bits in the beginning to the longer chords later on. The key parts in the chorus are absolutely fantastic!

The things I’d suggest - first of all, there’s a lot of clipping, it sounds like when the Rhodes and bass are playing at the same time. Mix it to a little lower volume to start out with - you can boost the overall volume once the final mix is exported. The vocals sometimes have problems syncing up to the beat - it’s great 99% of the time, but a little tighter editing of the vocals could make that 100% and keep the groove going throughout the whole track.

Song-wise, a little more variation - say, a strings pad or something during the chorus sections, doing something as simple as doubling the Rhodes line (or holding the chords that the Rhodes is playing) - would liven this up even more.

But a fantastic start - nice, thick grooves and smart instrument placement and playing. Keep it up!

you do what you gat to do!!!

the pressor limiter clipping
can be an effect.

Great!!!

Keep Rock!!!!!!