This is little more than yet another rearrangement of the original samples. I’ve already heard far too many remakes (instead of remixes) of the original. Warp those samples! Make some of your own. Abuse the deep sample library on ccMixter. Do something to make the remix your own. As it is, it sounds like dozens of other rearrangements of the Fort Minor sample sources. You do demonstrate a few good ideas. Put that energy and imagination into making something unique. Try a few more efforts. Don’t give up.