Musically this is pretty good. I’m hearing some vocal sync issues though. The lyrics aren’t hittin on the snares or the downbeat like they should.

The little electronica at the beginning interests me, but not so much as the setting for this rap.

The beats are light and pleasant. The vocals don’t come out as dynamic and intense as I think this rap deserves.

I like the little melody line pretty well, but the whole effect is just a bit “thin” sounding—not that I insist that everything have a “big” sound—quite the contrary—but here the effect is not serving the rap as it ought.

I don’t mean to sound too down, though, because I like the melody, like the beats and think this version has a lot going for it.