I like the vocal-only intro, and the vocal fx are okay as used.

I like the little percussion line, but it’s a bit soft to my taste.

I know it’s important not to overwhelm the vocals, but I’d be tempted on remix to bring all the instruments up dramatically.

The cool guitar line is way too background—this should be exuberant music, not soft music.

Still, this one has a good feel to it, and most of my concerns are just mix choices I might have (if I were not on a different, weirdbient wavelength about such musical things) have made differently.