I agree with both reviews - too much going on. This started as a video background piece - I added the vocals at the last minute. I tried to duck the pads and guitars, perhaps with limited success.

I’ll do a proper remix soon (after the election).

Thanks for the review.

I looking forward to hear the new version:)but careful..sometimes to much thinking took the feeling and just dissapear.leave the bass section,and try to not play different melody with all other instrument.thoose synths are bit plastic to the rest real instruments and i wouldnt play so much melody with that electric guitar,only end of the patterns and somwhere to adding colour.
i hope you dont mind my oppinion i just feel you ve got really good idea just u wanted a too perfect song.less somethimes more!
thanks