Well, the idea could be nice, however the drums sound too “old”, with a bad equalization. Apart from the “main” synth there is no bass synth, the surface feel is of “emptyness”, you could add some filter automation to the synth to make it more interesting. Then the synth variates with some notes that are “disarmonic” from the rest.

P.S. sorry for my bad english, hope to be atleast enough clear