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Reviews for "Pain and Pleasure"

Pain and Pleasure
by MC Jack in the Box
Recommends (5)
Sat, Dec 9, 2006 @ 1:43 AM

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gurdonark
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permalink   Sat, Dec 9, 2006 @ 2:36 AM
I think it’s important that you did not clutter this one up. It would have been tempting to do so many more effects (and of course, if I’d done it, it would have featured meadlowlark song). But the singer/songwriter vibe you have going here is better expressed with a light touch. These are great vocals, and you give them a great setting. I could imagine the addition of perhaps a little percussive slap on a guitar, but otherwise I’d say leave this uncluttered. The atmosphere you create for the vocal is appealing. Should the melody go a few more places? I suppose that’s the question. But I like this mix as it stands.
 
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permalink   MC Jack in the Box Sat, Dec 9, 2006 @ 5:35 PM
thanks gurdo. i always apprciate your thoughtful feedback.
 
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permalink   tripledoubler Mon, Dec 18, 2006 @ 4:52 AM
i share gurdonarks statement, very nice work, mcj.
you know how to write songs. though there`s still “Space” for improvement in this track, but you really layed out a convincing aesthetical concept for “pain and pleasure” that goes a different direction than a balladesque version:)
DJ BLUE
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permalink   Sat, Dec 9, 2006 @ 3:20 AM
nice work, J in the B. this is pretty tight and leaves you smiling. i like it. i would have liked to hear a break down or two to let the guitar breath a bit or maybe throw a little bit of keys in there somewhere. But the tempo and riff work really well. Solid. 5 from me.

cheers,
BLUE
 
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permalink   MC Jack in the Box Sat, Dec 9, 2006 @ 5:36 PM
thanks blue.
thedeepR
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permalink   Sat, Dec 9, 2006 @ 5:01 PM
great mix great voice
but maybe a little break will be cool (sugestion)
peace
 
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permalink   MC Jack in the Box Sat, Dec 9, 2006 @ 5:37 PM
yup, i hear you.
Analog By Nature
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permalink   Sat, Dec 9, 2006 @ 5:22 PM
hey jack this is totally cool.
very good.. love that little strum..
 
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permalink   MC Jack in the Box Sat, Dec 9, 2006 @ 5:34 PM
thanks cdk!

that little lead break section with no lead could really use a little something different over it. i might edit it with something. or maybe stefsax will throw some awesome sax riffin over it. :)