I think it’s important that you did not clutter this one up. It would have been tempting to do so many more effects (and of course, if I’d done it, it would have featured meadlowlark song). But the singer/songwriter vibe you have going here is better expressed with a light touch. These are great vocals, and you give them a great setting. I could imagine the addition of perhaps a little percussive slap on a guitar, but otherwise I’d say leave this uncluttered. The atmosphere you create for the vocal is appealing. Should the melody go a few more places? I suppose that’s the question. But I like this mix as it stands.

nice work, J in the B. this is pretty tight and leaves you smiling. i like it. i would have liked to hear a break down or two to let the guitar breath a bit or maybe throw a little bit of keys in there somewhere. But the tempo and riff work really well. Solid. 5 from me.

cheers,
BLUE

great mix great voice
but maybe a little break will be cool (sugestion)
peace

hey jack this is totally cool.
very good.. love that little strum..