Hey, interesting.

The poetry sample by riebschlager, good stuff, but maybe you could have effected the vocals some wya to fit the track. The track sounds like it took effort to layer and put together, and the sample sounds pasted on. (It works at 2:16 with the “tear out the eyes” refrain, but it may have flowed better if you did something to the vocals.)

With that out that way, pretty evil track. I like the groove , love that shredding synth bass that comes in about 1:30, very entrancing.

Yes, you said it, heavily influenced by hip hop, a good twist, you created a good NIN-esque type groove.

Lovin the high pitch synth keys too.

Great work. Keep at it dude, sounds like you can only get better.