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Drowning (not waving)
by ScOmBer
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Mon, Jan 25, 2010 @ 1:58 PM

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MC Jack in the Box
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permalink   Mon, Jan 25, 2010 @ 8:36 PM
hey, great story man, thanks for sharing. i can relate, got pounded once on a winter swell down near Ventura, got beat up in the wash, and struggled to get back in.

love the mix, and how you’ve assembled the parts, love the sassy girl, obviously I love the St. Paul track, and i’m amazed how well ed’s guitar track fits.

ok, here’s where i offer what i’ll call the “constructive criticism aka my 2 cents”…the arrangement here is money except for one small issue i have with the third verse (i feel your touch…). i just think the guitar needs to drop out and come in on the next verse (waves that crush). i feel like the guitar overpowers your vocals. same thing happens again on the verse right before Anchor comes in. love the Anchor stuff too.

but aside from my differences of opinion on the arrangement, great job!
 
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permalink   ScOmBer Mon, Jan 25, 2010 @ 9:23 PM
Thanks mcj, yeah I agree with your points and noticed them all b4 I uploaded- but I didn’t fix em because I was sort of over it as soon as I sung the vocals - don’t really like to dwell on it if ya know what I mean - I think ya understand as a surfer . Quite hot and peakinkong in sections but that was what it felt like sucking a sea urchin thx dude
 
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permalink   MC Jack in the Box Tue, Jan 26, 2010 @ 10:10 AM
well, if I didn’t think you were such a good singer, it wouldn’t matter so take it as a compliment. :)
Krzysztof Sujata
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permalink   Mon, Jan 25, 2010 @ 9:16 PM
Wow great track. From the first few seconds it was pretty kicking, and didn’t let off from there. Nice job
 
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permalink   ScOmBer Mon, Jan 25, 2010 @ 11:20 PM
Thanks, glad I’m still here to thank you :-)
timberman
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permalink   Mon, Jan 25, 2010 @ 9:32 PM
Wow, Scombs. What a drama. Impossible to stop listening. I think your voice and Ed’s guitar adds a great energy to the “bed” that wasn’t there before. Your vocal line is great too. Already listened three times and this mix just grows. Great job, man.
 
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permalink   ScOmBer Mon, Jan 25, 2010 @ 11:18 PM
Thank you Per for uploading such a great bt, and Ed for the guitar shredding :-) glad you liked it I was a bit worried that I’d left my additions too cheap and nasty. Like ya new avatar- what’s happening below the frame?
 
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permalink   timberman Mon, Jan 25, 2010 @ 11:59 PM
Not much happening below the frame, I’m afraid. She’s my regular hair and beard person. As a bonus, though, she gave me the number to a nurse that had the Swine flu vaccine in stock but that’s another story.
 
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permalink   timberman Tue, Jan 26, 2010 @ 12:48 AM
Listening again. I think the mix could benefit from a little volume increase on Anchor’s voice but that’s just me.
 
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permalink   ScOmBer Tue, Jan 26, 2010 @ 3:11 AM
I have a real problem mixing anchors voice when there’s lots of mid range. I’ve tried compressing him but I squash his panama hat lol. I’ve also tried panning him but I like him so much I can’t do it lol. Seriously though his serious spoken tone is right on the freq of the toms in my remix. - love to know how you split him away in yours
 
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permalink   timberman Tue, Jan 26, 2010 @ 7:50 AM
With Anchor, I usually first compress (medium, not too hard) and then decrese the lower range and sometimes the mid a little bit too. It varies from pella to pella and what the b/t is like rangewise.
Anchor
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permalink   Tue, Jan 26, 2010 @ 5:41 AM
quite a concept and production -
Sometimes the mood of an offering transcends the production snags -
I enjoyed it much.
I did read the comments concerning the possible technical alterations - and as regards my “spoken word” recordings: please let me know if you have any suggestions regarding mic placement, clarity,volume - etc.
I do try and keep them pretty raw - since the ccmixter advice on the “pella” upload page suggests a minimal of tampering.
In the future - if you want me to re-record anything to help you out - let me know and I will see what I can do.
But back to your piece here - all in all its lots-o-fun to listen to.
 
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permalink   MC Jack in the Box Tue, Jan 26, 2010 @ 10:09 AM
hey Anchor, first, let me join the “anchor vocal fan club” bandwagon and say I always love mixing your stuff. It’s cool that you are willing to modify/adapt your recording technique (and accept constructive criticism) but you are correct in keeping your pellas “raw”, as in uneffected with reverb or modulation (and that includes autotune).

the best thing anyone recording vocals can do is take the time to get a good recording of them. Doing this will insure many remixes, not doing this will result in few with less than optimal results. If all vocalists took the time to make sure they got good signal capture (by adjusting the gain on the input to about 90% of peak, or where it redlines) and used a pop screen to reduce their plosives, there would be lots of happy camper producers all over it.

i also think that in many cases, recording gear can be a limiting factor (cheap mics vs. good ones, using preamps, etc) which is all the more reason for anyone to perfect their recording technique to achieve the best possible result.
 
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permalink   ScOmBer Tue, Jan 26, 2010 @ 1:01 PM
Thanks Anchor, your production values are always spot on, and your delivery always evokes and tranfers emotion to the listener (so well it’s scary). I too am a member of the AM fan club. Keep doing exactly what you have been doing :-)
cheers my friend
SackJo22
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permalink   Wed, Jan 27, 2010 @ 9:02 AM
So glad you lived to tell the tale! This rocks!!!!
 
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permalink   ScOmBer Thu, Jan 28, 2010 @ 12:25 PM
Thanks S :-) good luck with the show x
CiggiBurns
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permalink   Wed, Jan 27, 2010 @ 10:21 AM
Wow! Glad I got here at last with my leggies round my neck. What an exciting track, Scomber and friends!! ‘The swell was big and stormy with rouge waves around the 15 ft mark. The reef is basalt with sea urchins and a deep water channel running behind it with a kelp forest.’ Crikey - it’s just like that on the beach at Bognor Regis. The girls in the Raynes Park fan club couldn’t listen without shrieking and moaning at the thought of you dying. I was pleased to hear that Sassygal is a fellow mermaid. Loved the whole drama. xxxx
 
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permalink   ScOmBer Thu, Jan 28, 2010 @ 12:26 PM
Thanks Ms Cig. Without a little drama life would be rather boring x
Subliminal
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permalink   Thu, Jan 28, 2010 @ 12:11 PM
Ofcourse you’re no good to me dead when the water hits the dykes, so be careful next time. On the other hand, if it inspires you to do such great tunes…well, maybe I could learn to walk on water…Thanks for using Edwin’s lead guitar. I will send him a link to your upload.
 
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permalink   ScOmBer Thu, Jan 28, 2010 @ 12:31 PM
You can walk on water Sub. I’ve seen your countrymen here in Oz on the beach sporting the long socks and chunky Jesus sandles. I’m sure they’d float if a wave washed through the beer garden at the local pub. Thank Ed for me for some terrific shreading on that guitar :-)