Overall I like this but I felt the vox treatment and level left the girl fighting against the backing track.

That lead synth is a nice dominant theme but again I would have liked to have seen the levels taken up and down to go with the flow of the vox.

Stunningly lovely melodies s.c.mixer! I love the feel you got here.

I really like the dreamy voice treatment, but I feel you could put just a bit more low end in this track. Maybe translating the high pads a few tones down could separate them from the voice and create a deeper dreamy feel, with only the voice very high up.

Well, sorry for the perhaps lousy advice :)