I’d say you’ve done them justice MMT. You done good!

Sure it does!!! And it does it great in my opinion

impressive. this is a real art piece. great use of deb’s stems and spoken word, and your singing creation of chorus takes this from wandering to memorable hook. sweet.

Jeez, so much good music here today. The hypnotic and very cool drums and percussion are fantastic and your vocal additions are so right. Top class mix!

After a slow start - I was a little bit “what, just reading words and some bells for the whole song?” — *WOW*. The refrain really ties the whole thing together and suddenly the whole song emerges. Love it!

This wonderfully captures the essence of sadness in the way that it comes in places you don’t always expect it.

Like a sad moment in the garden: like going to meditate and find peace, and realizing after a Zen moment that there is no peace.

I love that the chorus is drawn directly from the poem.

Thanks K! You’ve done such amazing work with this. I love our collaboration. Your vocals are true to the poem and they really make it come alive. (I also thought it started a little slow but the slow start served to emphasise the refrain and I have listened several times now!)Well done!

Subtle, lovely, with a deceptive simplicity that required a lot of mixing skill. I really like the way you’ve handled the vocals and made them fit naturally into the mix. Very well done.

Like everyone else have allready said you have done justice to those words. I like the chorus you’ve added, although I think in the first chorus the timing of the bells is a little off.
For me the slow start is perfect nicely balanced with the sort-off up tempo parts. I allways like the lofi sound of debbizo vocals and I love how you put that feel trough out the song.
Great remix it even grows on me every time I listen to it.

I love your backing track and your vocals completely compliment Debbizo.
Well done.

Yes - this is an absolutely terrific track. I think you’ve represented debbizo very, very well.

I like the pacing - deliberate progression and build-up.

Nice work.

Beautifully constructed piece. The delicate simplicity and minimalism compliments the spoken word perfectly.

This is absolutely fantastic! The sparse structure at the start (windchimes I love em) Debbizo’s profundity and then ooooh the tumbling dice ! Excellent, excellent excellent.

You succeeded in bringing the focus to Deb’s voice and words. This is a particularly sad and moving piece. Your vocals are warm, soothing, comforting, despite the troubling lyric. The pacing works for me in setting the feeling of hope and tension inherent in the story. Excellent work! (sorry for the late review — I’ve literally been working myself sick lately)