I don’t know if you have listened to other remixes of this pella, but I admire your rhythmic sensibility with it. A bit cowbell-happy (insert Christopher Walken reference here), but an interesting take, just needs a little more variety, dynamically speaking. Shows great promise, but not quite a “Recommend” yet for me.

I’m with the big duck here, it’s a bit start, out of the gates, perhaps a bit empty. The frenetic rhythm of the pella is definitely workable with the sonic climate you’ve developed, but it feels that some of the options open to you in creating your atmosphere haven’t been fully explored. Perhaps some variety in tonal quality and dynamics could most benefit this good start.

The nice thing about spoken word is that it lends itself to many different soundscapes…like this one.