sometimes the emotion in a piece just cuts right through any possible objectivity and DAMN was I ever in the mood for this… but I’ll try:

This track would be radio ready if you could do a little better at matching Pat’s reverb and then put a touch of that on the vocal track — right now it sounds like what it is: you spitting over his completely track. If you could get the vocals just a touch more IN the mix rather than ON the mix it would be a perfect track.