Try adding a bass subsound under your bdrum beat. Also having the hhat such a driving sound you need to work it a little more.

I think this is really hot!!!! Its definitely MTV/BET ready as far as the beat goes. Bouncy, clubbish and freak nasty-danceable, its a very foward moving track. The rap is pretty straight, too. I would of liked a little more attitude or style. Just needs to ride that track better. Not that what was done was sub par, but you know how it is in rap. You gotta have that hood star swagger if you’re banging out these kind of commercial "style of the moment" tracks. Good Shyt!!!!

GOOD STUFF.

yeaah.thats the kind of style i like.
nice flow, and a song i would play at a party.

So here is where its at Mr lang. The new boy goes back to your first mix over two years ago and i find you are a major player on here with an outstanding body of work.

And what i also find is from day one you’ve been ripping it up with some fine mixes. I touched a few on the way to this one. It’s gonna take a while for me to check em all but i know it will be worth it.