Hey, don’t put yourself down- there’s plenty going on here in only 2:04… and it does a great job of enhancing focus on the lyrics, rather than distracting from them. My one nit to pick is the b/g vox seeming a bit loud in the first chunk, but that could just be listening through headphones. This one’s creative enough for me, nice work!

Nice synth sound here. I like this little song, which is a nice treatment for the spoken word piece. At 2:04 it’s just the right length. The synth has a sunny, radiating feel—just right for a morning mood.

i agree with gurdonark totally,i woke this morning to see the sun melting the snow off the rooftops and this mix playing in the background was the perfect soundtrack for that beautiful act of nature

stunning mix dgeis.

The sound bed changes as we go thru and with it the emphasis on Narvas words. It works well.

Nicely done. My two sons commented on how they like this so you have touched two thirteen year olds! Very laid back, and agree with the comment that this is just right for putting the focus on the spoken word.

Great mix. Agree with all above. Terrific accompaniment to narva’s beautiful poem. MY nit pick is with your notes - of course it’s creative, you created it :-).

It’s wonderful. Perfect for this spring day.

Thank you so very much.

n9

“this is what Narva9’s lovely poem sounded like in my mind” I think thats perfect, listened to it a few times, That switch at 1 min works lovely. Love “multitude of buttered crumpets” happiest phrase I heard for a while. Very well done.

Beautiful assembly of voice, harmonic, and found sound! I have to agree with all that has been said – it’s brevity is also appropriately poetic.