I think you got a great track! You somehow turned a happy-mood acappella in something a little darker. Excellent production.

But I have some constructive critics also ;)
- Not 100% sure of harmonies against the vocals (more trained ear needed here)
- The backing track is pretty loud and hides the pella in some places (not very serious)
- Maybe you should have changed the tune a little more at 3:32, when she changes the singing mood, and introduced a longer breakdown
- The main lead synth is kind of overwhelming on the long term (are they just 3 notes?)
- Fadeout is *not* the right why to finish a dance track!! :P

But really nice overall

PS: check out my latest dance track — your destructive criticism is welcome!!

WOW! YOu really captured that mid 80’s Italo Disco feel, all it needs is some vocodered harmonies and you’re there. Incredible track mate.