This is great. Great production. I especially loved the buildup and the beats. The vocals sound great, but they kind of got drowned out from the 2nd verse onwards. I’ll be looking forward to more versions.

Real nice Vidian. Thoroughly enjoyed this track.

I really like the feel you created on this but felt that while the production elements are really nice they did not hold together too well. Also on a personal level I was looking for some more bass sounds to emphasise the driving mood of the piece.

I think if you could rework this a little and pull it together more you’d have a great song.

On the other hand maybe this is what you wanted and in that case thats OK as well!!