first off, welcome and props for not getting pissy or frustrated when someone called you out on your last remix. i did listen to the first version, and that synth was off pitch and distracting, so it’s good you recognized that and acted on the feedback you got (even if it was pretty blunt…).

as for this, it’s a pretty straightforward interpretation with her source, other than the beats. there’s nothing wrong with that, but it’s always more “gee whiz wow” when you can take the source and really reinvent it somehow. but i’m as guilty of taking the straight approach sometimes, especially when the source is so good that it doesn’t need to be reinvented to be gimmicky to catch one’s attention. if there’s any constructive feedback to be given here, i’d say you could bring your beats down in volume a bit and bring the piano, guitar, etc up a bit to match them out more evenly. but your mix is clean, in synch for the most part, and nicely packaged this time.

Much Better! ;) I didn’t want to hurt feelings, so sorry if I did.