It sounds like you have a very good voice. Great 1st time out!

However, you need to sing your song as if it were already on the radio, full of emotion and power.

If you sing all quiet and airy, it’s hard for us to do anything with it.

I can tell you have good pitch and can obviously sing. Don’t be a wimp about it and belt out a good one so we can go crazy on it!

Here’s a hint: If you can, record a track of chords (piano) that go along with your melody, then put those to your headset. Then, record yourself singing while listening to the piano. Not only will you stay on pitch more, but you’ll also feel like you have to sing louder. Good luck!