haha, no i was in no hurry, unless you count my ADD. i kind of hear what you’re saying but honestly, i liked the arrangement enough to walk away from it, and sometimes that’s more important (at least to me) than spending too much time adding more. i guess it’s my zen-like, less is more approach. :)

the vocal track basically consisted of a verse, a chorus, and a spoken word section. i suppose i could have repeated either the verse or chorus (or both) and added a bridge and that would have added maybe another minute and a half to 2 minutes, but i didn’t really feel it was necessary to get the point across that i was trying to make. i didn’t want to overwhelm the spoken word section with too much in the arrangement (hence the piano stabs and filtered strings). and i guess i could have added more stuff within each section but like i said, personally i know when it’s time to say when for me. usually. if i haven’t been drinking too much.

but thanks for listening! i really enjoyed your opus for what it was worth. :)