This is a great mix my complaints are tiny - would be great if you could upload some of the samples you created here.

nit1: being a gtr player the only thing that strikes me is a tad too much verb on the wah gtr. obviously totally a matter of taste and nothing else.

nit2: I would have used a different chord when the piano is doing it’s 1-2-3-4, to create even more searing tension leading back into the main riff

I like this. Good use of guitar, and well-constructed around the vocal.
Nice crunchy snare too. Not entirely convinced by the piano, if I’m being critical.

yes, a wonderful remix for my ears, too.

And I agree with 4stones - I was secretly hoping for a more dramatically different chord on the piano to resolve the 1-2-3-4 build-up. There’s nothing wrong with the current chord, but it feels like you are leaving some major dramatic potential on the table.

Overall I really like the sonic picture you have painted!

Audiotechnica!

I am sorry for never been here for listening to this remix what is a shame!

This is a terrificly nice soundscape for this spoken vocals.
As a matter of taste, another musician/remixer would change always a detail. But can_t follow the critic on the 1234 piano theme build up.
I would say: never change (a) winning chord(s)! ;-)

This is nice and exciting.