Really? I’m never satisfied with the way it sounds on track 8P

I mean I can be, but I’m always wanting it one notch up.

Yes sir, it sounds good. BTW, I prefer your pre and post banter. Wish it were longer, LOL. Just a personal preference of course. I find it easier to remix a spoken or sung pell, rather than a fixed cadence. Again, to qualify: This is just my remix preference.

Oh it’s all good, you know we all live on feedback anyway 8^)

If I ever get inspired I may make it longer. But with my current pella work I mostly just want to riff off my head, “get er done” and move on ^_^ More important or “timeless” pieces will get a revisit while most of my political raps will just gather dust

I’ve extended the 10 line second verse into a standard 16 bar verse and repeated the hook at the end. It’s almost three minutes long so that should be more satisfying for you 8^)

thanks. have added this to my “ideas bag” playlist. will see how it goes. cheers!

Awesome, and I know how that “bag” works 8^)

If you’re like me you download the files and then just grab them if you want them later. The delivery was still rough so I did a very laid back delivery marked best pella that is so much better. I called it “Chill,” then I had to redo after that hip hop style to fit the track. So either are the best takes.

I have a radio interview coming up Thursday so I wanted to revisit some of my best and most recent work 8^)