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Notice Me!
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Wed, Oct 17, 2007 @ 12:05 PM
 
pinkcutiepie
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permalink   Wed, Oct 17, 2007 @ 1:20 PM
Sweet! Totally hardcore; I love it! It kind of reminds me of Linkin Park in a way. I love the heavy guitars. You rock! ;)
 
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permalink   3rd attempt Wed, Oct 17, 2007 @ 1:45 PM
Thx, pcp! Assumed you originally wanted it that way? ;)
 
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permalink   pinkcutiepie Wed, Oct 17, 2007 @ 2:55 PM
Totally!

Hey, did you use the old recording instead of the new one I put up here? I think the new one would better match the speed of the song, since I was totally off on the first one. But, maybe the new version didn’t fit as well? Just curious. Still awesome, though!
 
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permalink   3rd attempt Wed, Oct 17, 2007 @ 11:23 PM
So, you’ve heared that! You’re right.
After some testing and comparing I felt 100 BPM too “hasty” and the first version cooler (esp. the chorus). Ok, my personal taste…
And, you mentioned it, the tapper lacked through. So I decided to go with the original material as far as I could.

To reach a higher level proposal would be to do a recording with the playback. But I don’t know if you would want to go as far as that and it’s also a matter of equipment. (And experience and patience and …)

Anyway, was fun to do that!
 
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permalink   pinkcutiepie Wed, Oct 31, 2007 @ 5:13 PM
sorry I’m replying so late.

But, I was listening to the song again, and was wondering if you could like upload a karaoke version? I really like the guitars and the style of the music. You really did an awesome job!!!
 
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permalink   3rd attempt Thu, Nov 1, 2007 @ 11:28 AM
Sure can I do!

Ok, soundtrack is up now.
Have fun! ;)
Darkroom
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permalink   Wed, Oct 17, 2007 @ 4:00 PM
I can’t explain it but even though the vocals are at times off and hissy, I like it. Very cool idea.
 
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permalink   3rd attempt Wed, Oct 17, 2007 @ 11:34 PM
Thx very much Darkroom!
Concerning the hiss maybe I’ve overdone it with eq correction on the vox. I’ve reduced the correction and replaced the file. Better now?
 
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permalink   Darkroom Thu, Oct 18, 2007 @ 9:11 PM
Yes. Officially a good track now. Can’t wait to hear more in the future.
gurdonark
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permalink   Thu, Oct 18, 2007 @ 3:44 AM
Great beat and a bass sound beginning, and I like the way you’ve set the vocals in the mix.
I like the melody, although it could be a bit more raucous and be consistent with the vocal. I’m glad, though, that you haven’t gone the full-scale noise route.

Some backing electronics, perhaps some cool freesound snippets, to give the piece a mildly industrial feel, would fit very well.
I’d like to hear some atmospherics to go with the longing and spirit of the vocal.

I like the way you vary things around 3—it really leavens up the song nicely.

This song needs a guitar solo in an instrumental break—something really adventurous, with runs and glissandi.

I like the return to riffs at 3:58 or so. The way the riffs just cut out at the end is not as much fun as if you’d had them fade and let her voice perhaps make its last “notice me!” cry a capella.

A very solid, good listen.
 
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permalink   3rd attempt Fri, Oct 19, 2007 @ 9:02 AM
Thx G!
I really appreciate your hints and will see to realize some in maybe a future revision.
Don’t know of course when I’ll feel like that, if ever.
DURDEN
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permalink   Thu, May 6, 2010 @ 1:34 PM
Great arrangement. Love the chorus
Donnie Drost
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permalink   Tue, Jun 1, 2010 @ 12:25 PM
What a lucky case, I found another pearl on the bottom of the great ccmixter sea. Love the dark guitars, combined with this innocent vocals.