love the keys & synth work…really nice. but i have to agree that the beat seems a little off. some of the sections where you drop the beat seem to flow better.

The little keyboard melodies and the sense of dynamism are fun here, but the constructions, and in particular the beats in the early going, hold this one back.

I suggest you lose the beats,and put an atmospheric pad under that keyboard.

It is a really cool a capella, a lot of fun, I think. I’ll have to sit down and give it a go eventually.

this is really spacey.
that beat is awesome, but it dosent fit the song i guess..
it sounds off-beat.