Dynamic and fits well. Good job. I love short pieces, but perhaps this one could have been longer. But this one really works for me.

This is damn good for a first attempt it is difficult to mix a longer track if the spoken word is short sometimes just repeating the word does`nt work. The lead sound seems to clash with the word sometimes I think knocking it back in the mix might do the trick. Well Done !.

music is terrific, and the spoken word is a good fit here, though the difference between the quality of the audio capture is really obvious, as the vocal track sounds like it was recorded through a computer mic. maybe a low pass filter/radio effect on the vocal track, or just balancing out the volume between the mix and vocal track would make it gel better, but it’s still a cool idea and well done.