The beats and percussion fit together well. The anger in the lyric stands out in this presentation.

The electronica break is interesting, but it fails to grab me as well as something else might. Yet, it’s probably true that the piece needs the leavening.

This is a good mix.

it’s a little scattered for my taste (is this stylus, battery kind of thing?)

also, encoded at 192 means only folks with HIGHEST ineternet connection can stream it with confidence — I couldn’t stream your file all the way through.

You can upload hi and lo res files here if that what’s you want.