The melody has a really retro mellotron vibe which reminds me of early Emerson, Lake and Palmer, except without so much squeal in the electronics.

The rhythmic beat is a bit virtual for me, but it’s a clever idea—a bit more variation in the early part might work better.

The melody adapts well to this electronic treatment.
I like the little backing sections as well.

The bit of raucous disconnect in the electronica does not always serve the piece, but I can understand why you’d want to avoid too clean and sterile a sound.

I’d like to hear this melodic keyboard run tied to something more varied and energetic, but this was an interesting listen.

Very nice work. The Drums kind of have that Kraftwork feel to them.