Nice work Karmickill! You did a wonderful job with the stereo panning efx etc.! It would be interesting to hear you nudge the vocals ahead of the downbeat just a tad so the phrasing of the vocals might fit in a different way. The only thing that seemed slightly odd was how the vocals fit (rhythmically) in the mix. This is very subtle though. You did a great job! : )

definatly a nice mix …
Just noticed volume is very low compared to other mixes - had to turn my speakers quite loud ;)

Very skillfully done.
The drum machine sounds are sweet, and your rephrasing of the vocals is very good.

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