A pleasant synth melody, and pleasant beats, which might have been mixed further up.

I’m sensitive to the need to make the vocals easy to hear, but this might benefit from a richer mix with the instruments all turned up a bit.

I do like the way the vocals sound in this mix. It’s a good first effort.

I think the vocals need to sit further back with the rest of the mix but I like the feel of the track and the arrangement is spot on.

not bad, cool first mix. welcome to mixter.