I like the guitar-ish riff at the beginning the very best. It would be fun to have that riff uplaoded in a sample pack as a separate file, if you’re so inclined.
For that matter, it would be fun to have all the component parts uploaded as a sample pack, in MIDI format.

This piece ie energetic. It’s solid as far as it goes. It needs something kinda paprika to spice it up—a vocal sample, a riveting solo in the higher ranges, something like that.

I like the energy of this as well, and the guitar being quiet makes it more interesting than a crystal-clear sample, I think.

There’s a lot of possibilities in these pieces, I think. I could see more percussion to give it an indian or african flavour, or perhaps some vocals or drums to turn it into something more hardcore.

I look forward to seeing what you choose to do.