This ambient piece has a solid melodic base coupled with a near-cinematic sense of suspense and mystery. I think it’s quite good.
A few ominous deep-pitched drones might be fun here, perhaps just pitch-shifting the ones you have on a different track.

You’ve really got a sense of “story behind the sounds” going here. Welcome to the mixter.

simply wonderful

5 stars

This is hot! Very very nice work. Definately transports me to another place. Very nice use of the samples. I’d love to see more ambient efforts in the near future from you!