Who said anything about the remix being crap. Its really cool. one of the best. contest is getting more exciting.

When the synthkey intro began, I found it a sound that wasn’t going to keep my interest. But things got a fair bit more dynamic when the beat began, and when you interspersed some fun dynamic electronica in the background. The
keyboard melody still sounds way too virtual to me, but it all works all right. The percussion could use some variation. The rap “pops” pretty well, standing out and keeping it dynamic.

I totally appreciate the originality of the approach, I would have maybe introduced a little more variation during the chorus. (Exposing the synth horns at the end doesn’t count ;)

pretty cool, i would love to hear more of a change up here or there, the stady sample needs a little variation.. good work though.

pal the remix is not really bad maybe u should give sum sound effects like delay n echo to beats to empower this composition a lil more.