Great progression i really like ! Bravo

You have elegantly captured the soundtrack to the problem of addiction. In the rhythm section there are some clicks/ticks that perfectly represent time dragging while Rob(?) tries to make it through Monday. Perfection.

I would like to add to your hangover dissertation one more little agony: the older you get, the longer it takes to recover. If a three-day hangover doesn’t stop you, you’re in real trouble.