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Supermarket Daydream
by Javolenus
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Mon, Mar 10, 2014 @ 1:29 PM

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Martijn de Boer (NiGiD)
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permalink   Mon, Mar 10, 2014 @ 3:40 PM
Hehe, that title ;)
 
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permalink   Martijn de Boer (NiGiD) Tue, Mar 11, 2014 @ 8:51 AM
If I may, I’d like to add a small (and humble) suggestion: it seems the bass is shifted a fraction of a second backwards. If you move it forward just a tad, it will sound more natural/groovy.

Everything else is just perfect, I really like your new guitar adds
 
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permalink   Javolenus Tue, Mar 11, 2014 @ 9:37 AM
Hi Martijn & thanks for this! I just uploaded a new version if you want to check. I actually moved the bass a fraction back in order to get a better sync to the VSTi drums. Hmm, I think these drums are actually the problem—would have been better grooving with a human drummer. The percussive guitar slaps are not perfectly in time either. Hmm, think this needs someone with better production skills than me!
 
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permalink   Martijn de Boer (NiGiD) Tue, Mar 11, 2014 @ 9:45 AM
That sounds way better to me! I actually encounter the same problem often: I record something in Audacity and it shifts the bass too. It’s extremely hard to adjust it, so mostly I just record it again. But this works greatly now
 
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permalink   Javolenus Tue, Mar 11, 2014 @ 9:50 AM
Thnx for this — yeah, I like this version better too. Good thing you made that suggestion as it prompted me to look more closely! :-)
 
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permalink   Martijn de Boer (NiGiD) Tue, Mar 11, 2014 @ 9:59 AM
Great Javo!

Playing bass all these years, the biggest (and probably the most important) thing I learned, is that bass is the closest to drums in music. If you shift any of them just a fraction, the groove falls apart.

When I try to come up with a bassline (in supermarkets or other places hehe), the rythmic part is the hardest, and in the end it’s what matters most.
Rey Izain
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permalink   Tue, Mar 11, 2014 @ 7:29 AM
I love the title…the tapping on the guitar (if that’s what that percussive sound was) occasionally feels like it’s too much. All the guitars are brilliant
 
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permalink   Javolenus Tue, Mar 11, 2014 @ 7:55 AM
Hi Rey & thanks — appreciate the feedback! Yeah, the tapping was done by laying the acoustic guitar across my lap and hitting the strings & body with both hands in syncopated fashion. This was the first track of the piece. I then added VSTi drums and by some miracle found that my tapping had been almost in time. And so I created a rhythmic backing track by fusing the tapping & VSTi drums together with some compression & phasing. I then asked Martijn for a bassline. Seems he composed this in his head while out shopping — hence the title. I then added the electric guitar impro. Everything was done off-the-cuff in single, unrehearsed takes.
 
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permalink   Rey Izain Tue, Mar 11, 2014 @ 8:53 AM
Unbelievably brilliant…can’t believe it’s off-the-cuff. Excellent
 
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permalink   Javolenus Tue, Mar 11, 2014 @ 9:40 AM
Hey Rey & thanks for this. Just uploaded a new version if you want to check? You’re very welcome to grab all the stems (they’re spread out over 3 ccMixter uploads) and work with them if you want. Anyway, thnx again — appreciated!
Speck
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permalink   Wed, Mar 12, 2014 @ 6:11 AM
Lovely mesmerizing chill.
 
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permalink   Javolenus Wed, Mar 12, 2014 @ 3:18 PM
Cheers Speck—appreciated!